Fan-made designs like the "Alice Princess" which are not available in the official game.
The Gvenet Gap was a mysterious, jagged space in the center of the royal gardens where nothing would grow. It wasn't just empty; it felt "broken." Whenever the Princess looked at it, she felt a surge of —a word the local children used to describe the specific kind of frustrated anger that comes when you just can't solve a puzzle. gap gvenet alice princess angy fixed
| | What could be tighter | |----------------|----------------------------| | Clear Gap Identification – The story opens by explicitly naming the narrative hole (the aftermath of Alice’s coronation where she storms away in a fit of rage). This lets readers instantly understand the purpose of the piece. | Predictability – The “angry‑princess‑gets‑her‑feelings‑sorted” arc follows a familiar formula. Adding an unexpected twist (e.g., a secret ally, a hidden prophecy) would make the resolution feel fresher. | | Focused Narrative – The entire fic stays inside the emotional crucible: Alice vs. the court, Alice vs. herself, and Alice vs. the looming threat. No extraneous side‑plots dilute the tension. | Pacing of the “Fix” – The climax (the “fixed” moment) arrives a little too quickly. A few more beats of internal conflict (e.g., a flashback to a pivotal childhood memory) would make the catharsis feel less like a deus ex machina. | | Canon‑Friendly Stakes – By anchoring the conflict in the political fallout of her coronation, the story respects the source timeline while still granting creative freedom. | World‑building Gaps – While the focus is on Alice, the surrounding court feels like a backdrop of placeholders. Naming a few key courtiers, giving them distinct attitudes toward Alice’s anger, would enrich the setting. | Fan-made designs like the "Alice Princess" which are